ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Description
Don't ask me where this crap came from, because I can't answer you!!! 
okay, so here's the deal: my bestie ~bandgeek4evur lent me her manga book and boy will she regret it 
there's a whole load of traditional drawing that I thought none of you would ever, ever see here on this page that will be flooding into your message center and causing your eyes severe pain 
sorry 'bout that!
anyway, this is sorta kinda my character Felicia from my book The Perfect Storm, which you can find in my gallery.
I KNOW NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY THAT THERE IS IN FACT STUFF WRONG WITH THIS!!!! So PLEASE don't hesitate to critique it if you're a drawer 
Thanks!!!
P.S. DON'T STEAL! This drawing and the character Felicia Tayle are mine!!!
okay, so here's the deal: my bestie ~bandgeek4evur lent me her manga book and boy will she regret it there's a whole load of traditional drawing that I thought none of you would ever, ever see here on this page that will be flooding into your message center and causing your eyes severe pain sorry 'bout that!anyway, this is sorta kinda my character Felicia from my book The Perfect Storm, which you can find in my gallery.
I KNOW NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY THAT THERE IS IN FACT STUFF WRONG WITH THIS!!!! So PLEASE don't hesitate to critique it if you're a drawer Thanks!!!P.S. DON'T STEAL! This drawing and the character Felicia Tayle are mine!!!
Image size
986x1282px 369.88 KB
© 2013 - 2024 TheWritingDragon
Comments18
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Overall Vision
Originality
Technique ImpactNot sure if I'm qualified as a "drawer," but I shall still have a try at critiquing this!
I guess I'll start from the top and work my way down here..the hair is quite nice, it looks really soft and flowy. The top does look rather lumpy though, but that's not really a huge issue. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>The main thing here is probably the jawline, right by the ear. The jaw should end right before or just under the ear, not behind it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/> Oh, and making the line a little softer would make it look nice, too!Now I mist say, I love the eyes! The expression is good, and so are the nose and mouth. In fact, the mouth is probably better than I could do XD Her right eyebrow is like, perfect, and so is the whole shape of the left side of her face.
The back of her neck is a little bit too straight, but again, that's nothing major. The ends of her hair look a teensy bit..messy, if you know what I mean? If that's what you intended then that's just fine <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>Great drawing!